Two things, Firstly top job on the editing, I certainly can't do it and I didn't pick anything wrong with yours indeed it was better than some of what the "big name" youtubers put out at times.
Secondly I f#*king hate rocker box and track rod bushes and I take my hat off to you doing them without the oxy on a bit of gear that has been sitting that long.
Dave_64, when i was in my late teens/early twenties i used to harvest grain crops for a local bachelor who was probably about 70 years old at the time. He would often ride in the header with me all day and talk in my ear. Anyhow, one day i must have been a bit late to start work because i had either been shopping, or washing, or something, so he suggested i should "get a maid in, from 7 'til 7". He then went on to say that i could please myself whether that period was daylight or dark hours!!! He was a great bloke, really good value! Thanks for reminding me of that.
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I reckon the voice is good and the delivery is great but might want to delete the "F" word if you see this as an international blockbuster series. Doesn't worry me as it is in my repertoire as well but more user friendly without it.